hey
well, to be honest, i liked this song quite a bit, it was pretty muddled though, hence the 6 in clarity, to fix that try equalize your sounds and compressing the ones that muddle the piece, its way more complicated that that, but that is a simple way of compressing the piece. I thought it was an interesting choice of instruments, needs more diversity though. keep it up
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