cool
this was differnt, and to me, different is good. Many slicer aspects, i think lol Anywasy good job!
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cool
this was differnt, and to me, different is good. Many slicer aspects, i think lol Anywasy good job!
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thanx :D!!!
cool
one word, cool!
lol im not in review mood
tnx a lot.....i put an effort to this......tnx again for your review
hey
This was an ok song, it brought back good memories, unfortunetly, originality was hit hard because its a remake, and effort also, bcause you spent 20 min on it. I was expecting a huge break when the song ended, with a series of strings with a one or two octave difference from the other instruments(higher that is) but i mean thats ok lol, we cant make evryone happy can we...anyways good job, this was nice to listen to
Dj_Seri
Hey man, thanks for taking the time to review. It's nice having 10/10 constantly, but 10/10 means "perfect", right? It's good to have a more realistic rating for once! Thanks. And thanks for that tip about the strings at the end - I did experiment with that a little, but it didn't sound right... though I suppose with my lack of knowledge in Classical composition, I probably wasn't doing it properly!
Thanks again.
hello
Nick here again. I liked the progression in this one, really. You have something about your songs, a sort of originality which i respect tremendously, good job. You have my votes and appreciation.
Dj_Seri
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Thank you so much for the feedback. It's really, really, reallyreallyreallyreally appreciated... Since I don't get too many reviews, I kinda get over-excited when I get one.
hello
My name is Nick, You revieved my inactive account NDP not solong ago on runnaway, my active one is Dj_Seri. Anyways to the point, I really enjoyed this, because of its orignality, it isnt really dance, but then again who decids what dance is. I found this very ear appealing in the sense that there wasnt any unharmonized chord lines or false notes here and there. More work on equalizing the sounds could have been done though. The piano was repetitive in this one BUT it seemed to fit perfectly. Besides, clarity, i would not change anything in this piece. Good job.
Dj_Seri
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Yeah, I wasn't too sure of the genre (maybe it is classical but I wasn't too sure cause of the drum beat), and I know I have to work on the repetitive thing, it's in most of my songs.
Anywho, thanx for the review and the critique, I appreciate it.
hey
Hello, this is Dj_Seri, well i will give you a long review because i am nice :P
Well, i liked the dark begining, the bass was too low though and i think was on the wrong note because it just didnt fit. I can hear ahint of LoZ temple of time influence Lol, maybe its just me :P Its cool, but you need a stronger kick, you can achieve that by putting a compressor on the kick. Along with hardcore dance comes the familiar kick bass beat. i didnt hear that unfortunetly... anyways, you have great potential, keep it up and youll soon be at the top and rivaling with me :P
Sincerely,
Dj_Seri
(Please dont take this offensively, i am here to help out, and well i am giving constructive criticism.)
do u know what hardcore music is?
heh ive listened to every damn music person out there, underground anin ther countries, yea and well people like some of the most shitty music, hah yo newgrounds, im seriously done this time, none more music, since u dot like it, theres no point, so yea bye finally jeez
im sry
i didnt like this, as a pianist, i thought there was a major overuse of the pedal, if this is live then yeah the pedal needs to be fixed if it isnt then well fix the delay? Anyways, it was a typical melody i could easily predict where it was going, Which IS agood thing sometimes, but not for me. Im sry, this is a good piece, very well played but i disliked it :(
Dj_Seri
I'm not surprised about the rating you gave it, especially if it came from a pianst, which I'm not. But I really appreciate our honesty. Thanks.
nice
Hey man, i dont know if uve seen me around before, but anyways, i wanna say that this start off very well, but like i think you introduced the bassline to far, you should of brought it right after the silence when the kick comes in, but thats just me.I liked this, it was soothing, trance is not my style, but that doesnt stop me from reviewing and trying to help you out. Its a very soft melody then theres a disturbing synth thats comes on too strong, maybe you should have introduced it smoother? It repeats alot though and ends bad. Anyways, those are the things i disliked...
what i liked, AWESOME choice of instrements, seriously, they all fit together and are well mixed. Thats a hard thing to do saometimes. good structure exept for what i mentioned up top.
Anyways keep it up, for trance id have to say work on NOT introducing instruments suddenly, smooth them in, mostly use fade ins if you know how to use automation, if not then gimme a call and ill help ya out with that
Keep it up, dont take this bad or anything, im doing what every newgrounder should do, constructive criticism.
Sincerly,
Dj_Seri
Peace
Wholy cow thanks man. Seriously, I'm taking every word you say in... And to clear up a few confusions, the [final?] part meant that it can and will be worked further if need be... Kinda like a demo, but not really. :)
Once again, thanks alot!
hey
This aint bad at all, props on the way you enhanced such a common melody and bassline, thats what ALOT of people need to learn to do. Glad to see some more people who can focus mainly on melody for a change(check out my piano songs to see that im also not all about beats)
anyways, keep it up, there was nothing wrong with this, just not my style thats all
Dj_Seri
hey
Good job on this, I really liked the intro, this a very good start my friend, and with a bit of practice and maybe some guidance you will be sharing the top spots in the dance section with me :P Unfortunetl for me, i have to work harder now, i need not another rival :P jk, If you need any help whatsoever, i am willing to give you advice, plz keep this up, and dont get discouraged easily by the zero voters and such.
Sincerly, Dj_Seri
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Im a pianist/composer, studying in jazz and classical right now. Love to stray away sometimes to make techno and trance. Check out my music and flashs!
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Mgill
Canada
Joined on 8/30/05