Score: 6

"im sry"

submission: Celtic Crapola Piano Thingie

date: October 6, 2005

i didnt like this, as a pianist, i thought there was a major overuse of the pedal, if this is live then yeah the pedal needs to be fixed if it isnt then well fix the delay? Anyways, it was a typical melody i could easily predict where it was going, Which IS agood thing sometimes, but not for me. Im sry, this is a good piece, very well played but i disliked it :(

Dj_Seri

Score: 7

"nice"

submission: Journey to Love[final?]

date: October 5, 2005

Hey man, i dont know if uve seen me around before, but anyways, i wanna say that this start off very well, but like i think you introduced the bassline to far, you should of brought it right after the silence when the kick comes in, but thats just me.I liked this, it was soothing, trance is not my style, but that doesnt stop me from reviewing and trying to help you out. Its a very soft melody then theres a disturbing synth thats comes on too strong, maybe you should have introduced it smoother? It repeats alot though and ends bad. Anyways, those are the things i disliked...

what i liked, AWESOME choice of instrements, seriously, they all fit together and are well mixed. Thats a hard thing to do saometimes. good structure exept for what i mentioned up top.

Anyways keep it up, for trance id have to say work on NOT introducing instruments suddenly, smooth them in, mostly use fade ins if you know how to use automation, if not then gimme a call and ill help ya out with that

Keep it up, dont take this bad or anything, im doing what every newgrounder should do, constructive criticism.

Sincerly,

Dj_Seri

Peace

Score: 8

"hey"

submission: ~Ying~

date: October 5, 2005

This aint bad at all, props on the way you enhanced such a common melody and bassline, thats what ALOT of people need to learn to do. Glad to see some more people who can focus mainly on melody for a change(check out my piano songs to see that im also not all about beats)

anyways, keep it up, there was nothing wrong with this, just not my style thats all

Dj_Seri

Score: 7

"nice"

submission: Techno rave 5(fixed)

date: October 4, 2005

cool, tired...cant...review....Lol, this is repetetive but its good. Keep it up

Dj_Seri

Check out my stuff too!

Score: 7

"hey"

submission: Bang To The Boom!

date: September 30, 2005

Good job on this, I really liked the intro, this a very good start my friend, and with a bit of practice and maybe some guidance you will be sharing the top spots in the dance section with me :P Unfortunetl for me, i have to work harder now, i need not another rival :P jk, If you need any help whatsoever, i am willing to give you advice, plz keep this up, and dont get discouraged easily by the zero voters and such.

Sincerly, Dj_Seri

Check my stuff out!

Score: 8

"hey"

submission: rock da house

date: September 30, 2005

this is actually very good, too much delay though!

Score: 7

"haha"

submission: Dreamlike Fantasy(Loop)

date: September 29, 2005

dude, there is an option close to the tempo, its a small black box, clickon it and choose CELL and your problem is fixed.Your Welcome

Dj_Seri

Check out my shit!

Score: 9

"hey"

submission: «DREAMS» [EN3RGIE]

date: September 29, 2005

great music, some compression probvlems though...anyways its all good, this rox, a tad bit rep though but when your dancing you cant even tell :P awesome melody

we will do collab soon

Dj_SERI

Score: 8

"you could do better"

submission: in progress loop

date: September 29, 2005

WE HAVE A 138 IN PROGRESS!

Score: 9

"nice"

submission: techno rave 4(fixed)

date: September 29, 2005

Much better :P Good Job on this one its cool and doesnt seem empty, well good job!Maybe add a few strings though...thats even better :P

Dj_Seri