Score: 7

"hmm"

submission: Move

date: April 4, 2006

well, i cant say much about this, i didnt like it :( too repetitive and well you need to master your intruments so that they dont collide and create static, the melodies sound way too random which makes it sound very amateurish.. anyways, keep it up i know you can do better.

Nicolas

Score: 7

"nice"

submission: Ravers

date: April 3, 2006

hehe i liked this ALOT, why arent there more reviews on this, you have a nack at fast melodies, good job.. im your new fan, although u gotta check my stuff out too!

Dj_seri

Score: 7

"hey"

submission: Noise 4 U

date: April 3, 2006

this was pretty cool, sounds like something ive heard b4 but i dont care even if is a remake of a melody this is pleasing to the ear, good job man, your on the right track, why dont you check out my stuff too

dj_seri

Score: 8

"hey"

submission: DJ Kazmo - Falling Skies

date: April 1, 2006

I liked this alot, it had a calm flow and it was very atmospheric. You had your base elements down pat. I was good to listen to the only thing i would of liked better was a stronger bass, but it doesnt really matter. Good job keep it up

nick

Score: 7

"hey"

submission: -WV- Nightlife (NG Cut)

date: February 1, 2006

Well, id say this was really good, but dude, enough with the presets lol, the melody is from z3ta!!! Well besides that, very good intro, good build up and ery good mastering, keep it up

Dj_Seri

Score: 8

"Hey"

submission: -WV- Fogata (NG Exclusive)

date: January 25, 2006

Hey, ima give you an honest review, this song starts off REALLY amazing, but the repetitive string just KILLS it, worst of all its not well mastered. NONETHELESS, this song is really good and im gonna tell you my two cents. Sounds VERY proffessional, xept for the little bits of mastering difficulties(which comes with time so who the fuck cares) The style and format of the song is PERFECT, i cant emphasize more than that...i was never let down, XEPT when the woman voice finishes and theres like a breakdown, the melody should have changed to something like a descending scale with the strings, to make a dramatic effect, it was a HUGE let down when the melody justy stayed the same :( Anyways all in all, GREAT song, GREAT energy, this song would go big, all you need is to spend more time on it and get a real woman to sing a whole part for you!!! hehe

Nicolas

Score: 10

"Hello"

submission: -=Essence=-

date: January 20, 2006

Hello, My is nick, im the dance dude in newgrounds lol anyways...I have to tell you one thing, i really enjoy the atmosphere in all these songs of yours, would be PERFECT for games, you have a really good ear and talent. It amazes me how these songs would blend perfectly into the scene it would be played on. I dont know, something bout your music... Anyways, i am into orchestraing,its my job now, and well ive always had a nack for game music, but never been able to pull it off cause im more epic lol...

Anyways, yeah, keep this up, and dont stop making this stuff, even if its off ng, continue and try to find yourself a contract!!!!!

Keep it up lol 5 from me

Dj_Seri

Score: 7

"Hello"

submission: Cex Bounce

date: January 12, 2006

Hey CexPanda! My name is Dj_Seri and im and old dance freak of the portal. I havent submitted in a while, but it doesnt stop me reviewing others.

Now, this had alot going for itself but theres a few things you have to make sure you fix. Your bass is original but it doest fit, cause of the slide it makes it sound off key to the rest of the song; maybe if you made a bassline(change the key of the bass) Another thing would be to take off all the echo/delay you have put(or thats on the premade plugins) Because its crumples up the song and makes static!!

This song is well organized and very well put together. I love the little chimes/bells, they add such awesome atmosphere! And the kick sounds pretty crisp on my headphones :P The only missing would be the changing bassline and it would be a great song! Keep at it its only going uphill from here.

Sincerely

Nicolas

Score: 7

"hey"

submission: Flashburn - Red Raver

date: December 2, 2005

Hello Flashburn, i dont review often, for that i appologize. I wil give you a nice long one now :P

1: Starts very well, a good trick to make the kick bass be more "present" in the song is too compress both of them with the compressor in the fx channel and pu their volumes to almost the highest., another trick, is to lower the synth volume, like in the begining, this song would have been sop much more of a punch if the volume of the synth was cut by two. Then the kick bass would have made an impact! which brings me to my second point

2: Add some transitions, in dance, its very hard to make a nice, flowing song. You need so many uplifters, and effects to keep the listener attentive. I suggest you listen to some CT by Rob Mayth. He is Incredible. Youll understand what i mean afterwards. Be original when u use your drums.

3: Avoid repetition, a REALLY good trick, which ive picked up from tune up and cascada is to double your synth after a few runs, add another instrument that compliments the synth. That eliminates the repetition, even if its the same notes again. Also, you can easily avoid repetition by copy pasting your synth and modifying little things.

This was VERY well mstered, in my opinion(my speakers are strong ty very much :P) and it had a very good structure. If you spend more time on your songs to work on the three aspects ive mentioned, youll see you will be able to show your true potential. i spend up to 1 month on my songs now, although they are too big for ng, i dont really care anymore, i hate being limited. ou should break the habbit of creating for ng. If you want any tips or help or whatever, add me on msn, ill bne more than happy to anwser your questions. We can collab too if you want.

Anyways. Lol ill leave you at that, i dont want to give you any of my secrets...not in this review anyways lol

Peace

Dj_seri

Score: 10

"hmm"

submission: Romance for Clarinet and Piano

date: December 2, 2005

Well, you know, you have driven me to this winterwind, i must now go out, and buy a mic... i want to bring you competition :P watch out for me! with your talent, and knowledge...you will make a great adversary! I want to see what you can really do, you works have already gained my respect. Haha, im kidding... although i am coming to ng and gonna post my classical stuff too... you wil have to check it out when i do...muahaha...*erhm*

Dj_Seri